I personally understand Charles Fisher’s outlook on cellular devices because I have encountered people who were being inconsiderate while using their cell phone in a social setting. Fisher believes that the abuse of cell phone usage is causing people to miss out on more important things, like human interaction, and just having the common courtesy towards others. Last Thursday, I encountered someone at Win-Co who was in the line, chatting away on their cellphone.
Very few lines were open, and their were a lot of people waiting in line to pay for their groceries. I noticed a young woman in her early twenties in front of me, talking really loud on her cell phone about her personal life. Not only was she being inconsiderate to the cashier and her surroundings, but she was holding up the line by talking on her phone, instead of bagging her food. To make the situation worse she had a ton of groceries, and when the cashier told the lady her total amount due, she simply said, "Hold on, Give me a second." All I was thinking was man, this lady has some nerve! After quickly finishing up her conversation, she gave the cashier her money, started to bag her food, and proceed to take out her cell phone out once again. I think that this is a perfect example of how someone's cell phone usage in public can be inconsiderate and rude. People should pay more attention to their surroundings, and choose more appropriate times to use their cell phone in public.
I am not sure if you got the prompt answer completely but it still came out the same. I also feel as though you did more telling then showing. All in all it is a good blog.
ReplyDeleteI think you answered the prompt; there just wasn’t a lot of detail as to anything else besides the example. It’s a great example but I agree with Brian, details about how she looked or what she was talking about would have been great to read. You always do well on your blogs and use great personal experiences. You used strong words to get your point across and I always enjoy reading your blogs.
ReplyDeleteHey BFF, I Think you got some of the prompt down, I think i Wrote something about what you did to. like the others said, I don't think you answered it completely. Don't get me wrong, I really liked this post. you did great in writing this and answering what you could.
ReplyDeleteBrianna, you answered the prompt and expressed your feelings with details. Although your grammar is a little off you did great and it was well understood.
ReplyDeleteBrianna, great blog i can really relate to what you are saying because i have been threw the same thing at winco.Overall great punctuation and description.
ReplyDeleteI think that you answered the prompt pretty good but could have used more details overall I think it was a good blog.
ReplyDeleteyou answered the prompted and your uses of detail words are very good
ReplyDeleteBrianna, I think you answered the prompt. There wasn't a lot of details, but overall it was a good post. I can relate to your personal experience because that's happened to me quite a few times.
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